This is my slide show of battle at Kruger park this is my presentation it will be my last battle at Kruger park work hope you enjoy.
W.A.L.T recall events through the eyes of an animal.
Friday, June 10, 2016
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ReplyDeleteFantastic work Mikayla. I like how you set the theme by describing where it is happening (African Savannah). You could've define save and put a more interesting word that means the same thing like(Rescue).
ReplyDeleteYour slideshow was outstanding Mikayla, I love your personal commet Mikayla. Maybe you could define more words to your action part, well keep up the great work.
ReplyDeleteThanks for your feed back next time i will do it
DeleteYour slideshow was outstanding Mikayla, I liked the way you said "I heard my family coming to save me", But well done Mikayla I really liked your work. Keep your good work up.
ReplyDeleteGood job Mikayla.
ReplyDeleteI loved your slideshow, it was outstanding.
I liked how you used a picture.
Maybe next time you could, add more interesting words to your work.