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Friday, September 9, 2016

Its time for home


Hi, if you are new to my blogging this is a story about a chimp that went up to space. We watched a video about a chimpanzee going into space. This is going to be my final draft so this will be the last time you see any more space chimp. what I did well was my proof reading and what I need to work on is my punctuation. I hope you enjoy my post and have a great day. 

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