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Monday, July 31, 2017

Check Out Some Quality Blog Comment Tips

Today I have learnt what makes a quality blog comment, I have used video notes and I have picked out some of the main details. Take a look.

If you like something tell them.

If they have done a blog post about something you already know add some more detail.

Look at the comments to see if no one has already written what you were.

It is nice to have a connection with the writer.

Try to get a conversation starting.

Don't forget to add some facts they haven't added.

Ask questions.

It is always a good idea to proof read.

You add more words.

Friday, July 28, 2017

24 hour time


Hello today I learnt how to tell the 24 hour time, I have made a DLO to share what I have learnt with you. I keep on pausing it because I was making mistakes I will work on that next time. I hope you enjoy.


Friday, July 7, 2017

Not even aware!!

For week 10 we had a challenge to do six word story, my inspiration for this piece was this video take a look. Video.

Personal comment

This was a bit of a challenge but I would do it again because I love challenges.

No Sun


For week 10 we have been doing a poem, the group and I worked really hard on it. It is called No sun. We made a stop motion on google slides. Some of the pictures are off the internet. I hope you enjoy.
Personal comment
It was really fun working with them they are amazing and they get the job done, I would love to do it again with them.



Electric fog!?


W.A.L.T. create a model that shares something we haven't learnt about our mystery


For term 2 we have been learning about the Bermuda triangle and its mystery. Hope, Sharney, Nature and I made the electric fog and how the flight 19 went missing. We worked really hard and look what we made.


The start of the mystery.

For two weeks we learnt about the mystery and gathered information, after the research we made a DLO about the information we gathered and what we though happened to flight 19. After we made that creation we made a plane of what we were going to do we drawled planes over and over again until it was perfect, from there we grabbed the materials we needed and began to create until it ended like this. 

Personal comment

It was really fun but it was hard if I was to do it again I would do it small and easy and a bit more detailed.