The lions strike!! (First draft)

W.A.L.T recall  events through the eyes of an animal.

Success Criteria

I know I will be successful when my recount has a

• Title
• Orientation:  When? Who? Where? Why?
• Sequence of events:  What happened? Describe using the senses (hear, taste, see, smell and feel).

Personal Comment:  How did the events make you feel

First draft

                 The lions strike!!

4.5.12 It was another amazing day in Africa.  With my herd my dad is the king of the herd so he safes all the poor kids from the lions.  We were are all  walking across the bank to get to the water hole. I noticed dad’s shadow is dark it’s like in a cave, It’s like my safety blanket But I'm Just a calf.   Suddenly my dad stopped I knew something was not right we had crossed company my dad tasted lions. “Run my dad roared”   the herd quickly ran as fast as we can my heart was pounding as fast as it could.  suddenly something was on my back I felt the lion for the first time.   There was a sharp pain going down my back their was a big scratch I lost my balance.  SPLASH!!! I fell into the water I got dragged out but then SNAP!! a crocodile got me now they were playing tug a war for there lunch I was the rope sadly. The lions won the fight between the crocodile and the lions I could hear my herd coming back to save me.  I could smell freedom.  All I could see was the lion for my first time.  Here comes my dad with the herd they quickly grabbed me out and chased after the lions.  My dad sent out a big moo to say it was clear.  I felt scared and frighten hope fully it does not happen again.  

Thank you family I was frightened I did not think you would come back for me.  Then dad sent out a big moo to say I was ok.  I felt Scared after that it was a rough day.  I was happy that you came back to save me.

 

Animal creator

The Redhorsecat

Diet: Carnivorous

Deer, Rabbits, Hares, Raccoons, and Rodents.

Head: Cougar

After they finish eating, they may cover the leftovers with leaves to save them.

Body: Woolly Monkey

They have a lot of hair to keep warm in winter.

Legs: Red fox

An adult weight of 3 – 11 kilograms (6.5 – 24 pounds). Redhorsecat have strong legs which allow them to reach speeds of approximately 48 kilometres per hour (30 miles per hour), a great benefit to catching prey or escaping from predators.

Tail: Horse

Have narrow tails with a small tuft at the end - a fly swatter. Look at a horse's tail and you will see something quite different - a fountain of hair that appears to sprout right from the horse's.

Habit: Forest

I picked a forest because it’s a wild animal that loves nature.

Battle at Kruger National park sequence

W.A.L.T recall events in order.

	The Herd of buffaloes are walking  on the bank and having a good day.  But what they don’t know, there are lions.
	The lions are eyeing up the buffaloes they are hungry.
	The lions are getting ready to charge at the buffaloes.
	The buffaloes are running as fast as they can to get away but the baby is slow so the lion is going to get the baby.
	The lion is about pounce on the  baby so they can get the adults next.
	Splash!! They got the calf and now they are playing tug of war for their lunch with a crocodile "Help me cried the calf".
	The lions defeated the crocodile the parents came back with a herd they surround the lions.
	The lions keep trying to attack the buffaloes but the buffaloes are charging back.