Today I am showing my new novel study and hopefully you can help me with feedback that I might have missed. I am not finished this yet its a work in progress. I am showing you my character traits and one of the main characters his name is Max. I have done some other ones that are done but this one is my best one. Take a look and take your time.
Hi Mikayla this is a really good post you added a lot of interesting stuff like he lives with grim and gram I find it really interesting that their names are grim and gram but you need more evidence on why their names are Grim and Gram also you need a little bit more info about this character if you can. And make sure you spell your words right at the top of the page because it says process instead of progress, besides that great work.
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